Roxas

[Sirlock]

Ideas?

[oNo]

The smudging is way too hard on this, and if you ask me i don't think thats a very good width side i would recommend making it smaller and as i said before the smudging is too hard go to your smudge tool editor and experiment with that, and that black spot in the top right corner isn't very good. The text should be moved closer to the focal and work on the lighting with a soft white brush 65-150 pixels large.
Keep going at it.

[Sirlock]

Yeah something about this bothered me when i finished it, and i noticed a lot of it did, i just was trying to get some general ideas.

[FatalFury]

i agree with MrK, needs to blended in better and have sum depth, also lightening could use sum work .. KIU

[Sirlock]

Redone for the most part, after thinking for a little while what to do.

[cC.Shadowvector]

Looks way overshaperned.. i think its the smudge settings that need some work, are u using normal brush with no settings applied(default)? >_< KIU!

[Sirlock]

Yeah I am basically using the default brush, Im not sure how to edit the settings.