Jared Leto, 30 seconds to mars

[Spardaa]

[cC.DOMINO™]

kinda a floating head sig goin on try reducing some of the stuff covering his neck a lil bit. colors are ok, the gold effects over the head are nice, although I would suggest that it could use a tiny bit of cleanup over the face area mainly the eye region, it has lq areas in that range, text also is questionable, it is readable but the angle kinda kills it, maybe just keep it straight and on the other side closer to head. kiu i like the effort.

[Spardaa]

Hmmm... Thx
Great thx about text ^_^

[Takken]

Nice contrast between the colors. The color scheme is nice but the composition needs work on. Read what DOMINO said. Utilize the elements and arrange them better. Also know what fit and what don't. I find the BW focal doesn't suit the color scheme you got going on the best and the text doesn't go. Work on your lighting and composition. Keep at it!

[Dron]

first of all FHS - it kills whole tag, also your focal is too blury sharpen it a bit to make it higher quality, colors is nice but the white at the bottom kills them for me.. KIU

[Spardaa]

Something like that?

[Spardaa]

or like this