Corruption

[schultz]

after 4 days of rest


v2

i really like this one.
cnc please

[i make sigs!]

gosh noob
i like v2 more idk what else to say

[Jay X]

Good lighting good Effects too many focal points
i would choose Either the right illi or the center one use the ones you dont choose a focal point as bg effects
That's just my Opinion

[schultz]

rofl, i was aiming for a flash back style.. i dont know how to explain it but the i really made 3 focals for it.
thanks for the comments

[Jay X]

i cant see the diff between the two....

[schultz]

the colors m8

[bcfcant]

I personally don't like the fact of the more than 1 focal idea although I'm loving the colours.

It looks good but needs more depth imo

kiu mate.

[Maietrix]

It needs some focus, I think you should blur the background a bit, and get rid of the text. Colours are pretty sweet, and the lighting is cool nice job.

[schultz]

heres the version without text and blurred bg

thanks for the comments

[Takken]

The separate focals are too separate and they stand out too much. There is no one definitive focal to appreciate. I like the color scheme but the multiple focals really killed it. Dislike the text. Got good color but poor taste haha, jk. Keep at it!