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    There, it's been a while since I posted here to CnC my work
    This time is a a structure, Birdsnest from china if i'm not mistaken

    CnC please thanks
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    Its sort of hard to define anything within the piece. Also the blur bg does not. I thinkt he lighting is misplaced, also the elements can do with better arrangement so one could focus ont he focal more properly. Work on composition. Keep at it!

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    I think it's a nice tag mate just seems a tad too small for my likings.

    I like the colour scheme in this one.

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    Thanks,
    yeah I feel little bland with my work..it seems I need to work on the blending..
    though I think I'm not missing on the composition,
    I want it to be neat as possible
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    i disagree with Takken maybe he couldnt see your vision. i do agree however on the BG not makin sense maybe a forrest scene would have been better

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