crysis tag

[+s9.Oath]

here is the version i didnt use for the battle cause it was the wrong render/stock

[cc.mio]

sharp, sharp, sharp aaaaaand sharp,
focal definitely needs sharp -1
nice and simple effects +1
bg smudge is weak :< sorry, it dont works here -1
sorry man, you have a lot of better works

[Takken]

Sharpen the focal. Its too dull. Also the color scheme for the effects need to be co-ordinated. I like the smudge you did though. perhaps incorporating a more finer texture might give it a detail look. Keep at it!

[bcfcant]

I agree about sharpening the focal to make him stand out.

You've really added the c4d's nicely imo,
Background needs work though,
kiu