monk

[Lonnie]

something different.

original render
http://i413.photobucket.com/albums/p...1920_rende.png
cnc please

[Takken]

The elements have a nice feel but I think they need to be sharper and blending could be better. Try a different layer setting. The focal seems a bit stretched btw. Nice texture used in the BG. I do think the lighting behind the focal is too strong contrasts ugly with the rest pf the piece. Work on lighting and composition. Keep at it!