IceWolf

[Downfall]

[Downfall]

b u m p !

[Maietrix]

I like the blue colour but it's a bit monotone and flat, I think you should lighten up the outsides a bit too. kiu

[Liquid]

needs more depth but the effects are nice kiu

[Takken]

Remove the text. I like how you have the darkness surrounding the focal but try to input more elements into the dark sides and increase the lighting. Then increase the contrast. Use a more stand out blue mate. Work on composition. Keep at it!