Comics Love

[Shizo]

[sMom]

g00d w0rk ;D

[bcfcant]

It's good but it is hard to make out the render. also, change the 'love' part of text to a more comic style text like 'comics'.

kiu!

[Takken]

Text is too distracting. Also the blending lacks of the focal into the BG. I like the C4D placement but not their quality. Their blending isn't too well and it seems overcontrasted. The bright color in the left seems out of place. Work on your color scheme. Keep at it!