Finish HIM!!!!!

[Jay X]

V1:

V2:


Still trying to find my style...
What do you think?
C'n'C please

[thijs']

To oversharpened..
Nice C4D placing, (they are C4D rigth?)
Good looking render to but becouse its oversharpened it looks choppy..

3/5

[Wizdum]

Renders don't look that good on the side. If you added some more effects and placed the c4ds in a nice position at screen it would look better. Also add some photofilters and gradient maps.

[bcfcant]

I think it's hard to see the render.

nice c4ds. kiu

[Takken]

Focal seems a bit sharpened too much and stretched. Its also hard to discern him because of the color scheme and lighting; the lighting is too harsh. Also the arraign of elements and variation are too inconsisntent and lack any form good composition as a result. The color schematics are oversaturated and overbrightened. Use more subtle colors to introduce contrast. Work on your color scheme, lighting, and composition. Keep at it!

[Jay X]

Version 2?

[Downfall]

no flow, not a good depth, lighting needs work, render and background do not blend and its way too oversharpend it herts my eyes but keep trying you will get there some day

[thijs']

v2. already looks better.

Still over sharpened.

[i make sigs!]

v2s color scheme is very weird
just change the lighting on v1 and make it flow