My latest. :D

[Cap'n Jazz]

Please tell me what you think. I think it is my best so far.

[Maietrix]

Get rid of text, and border, You should probably set the yellow light to overlay, if you already did lower the opacity. Depth isn't bad, make a v2 and do what I said and see how it looks. KIU

[marioman77]

yes deff remove the text. blending is pretty good and lighten up the lighting.

[Cap'n Jazz]

The text is essential though.

[zole]

I agree with both of them

The text is essential though.

No it isn't? haha

[marioman77]

dont use text if it will make it worse, I suck at text so i never use it.

[Cap'n Jazz]

I want the text, a tip on how to make it look better would be far more useful then just telling me to rid of it.

[marioman77]

maybe make less text... like only resistance with smaller text. and use a clipping mask on it. also if you want move it closer to the render...idk im not that good with text

[Takken]

I think the depth could be amplified if you use better lighting with color schematics and contrast. All I see is blurring and that doesn't really help. A soft blob doesn't create lighting. The lighting isn't good. Utilize more elements in the piece to help contribute to its composition. Work on your composition and lighting. Keep at it!

[Cap'n Jazz]

Hmm... How do you suggest adding lighting in another fashion?