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    Default dont shoot :(

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    C'N'C PLOX
    Last edited by Jay X; 07-02-2010 at 02:02 PM.
    thanks naruto <3


    Quote Originally Posted by littlefeet View Post
    they say until it happens they wont believe it, but if it ever does happen, they'll say it didn't actually happen. So it can actually never happen to them, even if it does happen to them
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    forgot to make text layer visible in v2 ^^ my bad
    thanks naruto <3


    Quote Originally Posted by littlefeet View Post
    they say until it happens they wont believe it, but if it ever does happen, they'll say it didn't actually happen. So it can actually never happen to them, even if it does happen to them
    << LOL

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    nigh on the text

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    Quote Originally Posted by i make sigs! View Post
    nigh on the text
    Thats it for your C'n'C????
    thanks?
    thanks naruto <3


    Quote Originally Posted by littlefeet View Post
    they say until it happens they wont believe it, but if it ever does happen, they'll say it didn't actually happen. So it can actually never happen to them, even if it does happen to them
    << LOL

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    The lighting is off. I find the elements tbehind the focal to be too chaotic, inconsisntent in terms of variables and the color blending is a bit off. The shapes simply do not go with the C4D. Seems a bit ugly in contrast and the text doesn't fit. Also, the BG looks choppy, oversharpeneed and stuff. Work on your composition. Keep at it!

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    Whats wrong with the composition?
    thanks naruto <3


    Quote Originally Posted by littlefeet View Post
    they say until it happens they wont believe it, but if it ever does happen, they'll say it didn't actually happen. So it can actually never happen to them, even if it does happen to them
    << LOL

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    Remove text imo and change the grey background to something else, it's seems boring imo.

    Also the arrows behind the render seem choppy. Good work tough, maybe put some effects over the render to blend more?

    Kiu mate, you really are improving


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