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    Default Half life


    v2:

    V3:

    idk looks kinda unfinished
    Opinions?
    Last edited by Krunch_; 07-03-2010 at 03:17 PM.

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    I like it, especially with the use of effects for the hands.
    The blue- ish metallic c4d sticking out at the right side doesn't quite fit in.
    I think it would look great if you took that out.
    The lighting looks a little uneven as well. The right side is dark, and the left side is bright. I think you should darken the left side a bit.
    Last edited by Fayfie; 07-03-2010 at 10:17 AM.



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    Thanks for the comment
    Made a version2:

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    The lighting is too weak. Your not paying attention to it nor the contrast. Also the clouds or smudge blending is really weird and does not fit with the composition. And the city in the BG looks misplaced as well. Too much going on in it. Work on your lighting, contrast and composition and blending. Keep at it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Takken View Post
    The lighting is too weak. Your not paying attention to it nor the contrast. Also the clouds or smudge blending is really weird and does not fit with the composition. And the city in the BG looks misplaced as well. Too much going on in it. Work on your lighting, contrast and composition and blending. Keep at it!
    Made a version 3, increased the contrast and added some texture.
    I dont really want to altogether scrap the clouds, because i was going for a rainy-foggy-dark type scene :/


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    I like it, parts are a little over sharpened and not much depth. Lighting could be better.
    The render is choppy also, BUT the effects such as the clouds and stuff are awesome! KIU

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    Love version 3, loving the effects, great idea mate.

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