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Thread: Summer love

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    Default Summer love

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    C&C, or w/e.
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    I like the way you positioned the text, and the concept of it.
    However, the tag lacks on depth and because of that, it loses the focal point. I think it would look nice if you blurred the background a little.
    Also, the stock doesn't fit the background due to the lighting and colors, so I'd advice you to work on the lighting. In my opinion, it would look nice with a mini light source placed at the top right area, overlapping a bit of her head.
    When it comes to colors, a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.



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    K, going to fix the depth. And I'll blur the background a little bit more. And fix the colors so they blend a little better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayfie View Post
    a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.
    gradient map?

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    Yes that was meant to be gradient map :P

    Pretty good but I do agree with fayfie apart from the text, I don't like it; its too blurred imo.

    but depth definately needs work in this one,

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    Needs to be sharpened up a notch! Not really likin' the white stroke in front and color scheme is too dull. BG is lackluster. Work on your composition. Keep at it!

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