SpiderMan

[Shizo]

[Liquid]

looks a little chaotic,and needs more flow. maybe more blending? kiu

[Vicious Zen]

Liquid is right, needs more blending. The sudden shift from stock to the blurry BG is too much. Not feeling the stroke on the text, either. I generally find that stroked text looks really amaturish. Not really liking the blurry smudging on his chest either.
Not too bad overall, though. I like where you're going with this.

[bcfcant]

theres too much blur imo.

use a normal stock for a background in this one.