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Iron Man Sprite
I know it's pretty amatuerist but still comment on what i could do to improve!
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well you kinda have the right idea for the effects, as well as the lighting, but the effects are slightly messy, and the composition is boring, simply because everything is in the middle and theres just a blue blur on the left and right sides of your sig, making a nice composition is making a nice piece with using as much or as little of your canvas and making it nice to look at, design to make the viewer interested , keep that in mind
personally i hate borders, 99% of them i think they are dumb and are unnecessary...its like your trying to make a movie scene lol, which is dumb in my opinion...your designing in photoshop, try not using borders, show off ALL of your art, instead of just putting 2 black lines over the top and bottom of it
your type needs to be improved, you used a very sharp font, and the positioning is boringggg for me, and its black which makes its hard to read haha, the reason people use fonts is to read hahahaha, i think you sharpened the font to make it readable, when simply all you had to do was change the color up lol, work on your positioning of your type, making it interesting and yet at the same time, make it match your art, and if you cant make it match your art, then dont put a type in it lol, its not necessary
keep that in mind and keep designing! you got awhile to go, but you have the right idea
practice, practice, practice!
Last edited by excellence; 07-06-2010 at 04:57 PM.
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dude its REALLY nice with the effects but i have to tell u thats not a sprite o_o anyway KIU!
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Small doesn't make it a sprite.
Great job anyway, the flow is great and i like the blue. KIU
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yeah i dont think thats a sprite a sprite would somethin like this
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thats the sprite not fully cut out of the sprite sheet if you want some sprite images i can send a big pack to ya
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the render is WAY too small and the sig is too long for a sprite imo;
some good effects but seem too random again, kiu.
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