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    Default the force



    text looked terrible in it... rate it and tell me anything i need to improve
    thanks

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    really nice work but where is the light source, behind or top right?, the top right seems really bright aswell, kiu though mate.


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    i kind of made it behind him and his hand... LIGHTNING BOLT LIGHTNING BOLT!lol thanks.
    anyone else?

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    Don't center your focal, it makes me rage. Also try to blend the render a bit more imo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aether View Post
    Don't center your focal, it makes me rage. Also try to blend the render a bit more imo.
    However, if you think about it, the focal would look odd if it was placed on one of the intercepting lines in the rule of thirds.

    @topic: I think it would look better if you made the height of the canvas smaller (Mid shot) and add contrast to it, plus sharpening the focal points in the piece.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayfie View Post
    However, if you think about it, the focal would look odd if it was placed on one of the intercepting lines in the rule of thirds.

    @topic: I think it would look better if you made the height of the canvas smaller (Mid shot) and add contrast to it, plus sharpening the focal points in the piece.
    i jujst wanted to get the main part of the stock in it.. and i dont think it would look good at the side:P

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    Quote Originally Posted by xSattisfaCtioNz View Post
    i jujst wanted to get the main part of the stock in it.. and i dont think it would look good at the side:P
    Haha, yeah. Due to the width and the pose of the character/ render.
    Anyway, I think it would be sick if you made the height around 150px, added contrast and took away the borders.
    I'd give you an example, but its against the rules to do so. x_x



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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayfie View Post
    Haha, yeah. Due to the width and the pose of the character/ render.
    Anyway, I think it would be sick if you made the height around 150px, added contrast and took away the borders.
    I'd give you an example, but its against the rules to do so. x_x
    against the rules to do what?:O

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    Quote Originally Posted by xSattisfaCtioNz View Post
    against the rules to do what?:O
    Editing signatures or posting other people's work without permission.



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    Interesting BG but the clouds or w.e they are to the right lacks blending and the color schme needs extra tones. The lighting is a bit shoddy and it has a lack of contrast. Try more minimal elements to pinpout in the foreground to help the space around the focal. keep at it!

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