Jackpot

[Shizo]

but text ... yea he so bad

[Buckley]

The effects all around her (him?) are sick. I think the smudges above her (him? lol) messes up the flow. Still a nice sig, kiu.

[Vicious Zen]

Needs some more fine details. And I don't normally like lighting effects like that, but they're lookin' really nice here. I'd say, make your text smaller, and maybe try something a little subtler. Diggin' your use of the shapes here.