Star Wars

[x3mjkee]

[SF.Kira]

nice man

[Vicious Zen]

To be totally truthful, it's painfully plain man. You gotta add more eye candy to it, don't be afraid to go to town on your tags. Too many people only ever bother to try throwing one effect on there, rather than combining a bunch of different techniques in one piece.
Needs more color as well. I've never really been a big fan of monotone tags, they just look way too boring to me.

[chonfat]

text needs some work bro and yes as zen said its too plain... try using normal fonts instead of hardcore text