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[Tryne]

Maybeeee this version more better?

your CnC

[TatorGFX]

It looks empty, and I don't think there is enough effects, and the text could use some adjustments. The smudged background looks okay, but you should keep working on it. Overall, it's great attempt.

[tkskater]

Yeah same here, feels like something's missing, no offence. Though it's so subtle, apart from it being almost too subtle I like it, good job.

[Cap'n Jazz]

Not bad! The background is just a tad plain for my liking. The text isn't bad but "The art of killing" is kinda hard to read. Some contrast in the face and focal point is probably needed as well.

[Derosion]

Well. I like what you did with the C4D's, but yeah, more effects would look much nicer.

I'm not digging the "Art of killing" text that much, imo.

But it looks pretty nice otherwise (:

[Tryne]

it is 'Art of killing'

[Cap'n Jazz]

I like the updated version more... It's still just plain though. Keep it up.