gasmask

[Shizo]

[cC.Dispeller]

monotone colors,remove text,too bright on his head try to change place for render,left side distracting me

[Vicious Zen]

Stroke doesn't work on the text. Neither font works, also. I'd move your text down to the bottom, to flow off your stock. The eye should generally be moving from the face of the stock, downwards, and so it's usually best to play the type off the bottom of your stock. That's all dependent on the general flow of your stock, and tag though.

Not bad overall, I'd like to see a little more color though.

[Cap'n Jazz]

monotone colors,remove text,too bright on his head try to change place for render,left side distracting me

[cC.Dispeller]

constructive criticism