Harry Potter - 2nd attempt

[Stiggeh]

Decided that I didn't do enough with the stock the last time so I went for a smudge sig this time.



Stock

Comments and criticisms appreciated.

[GFX_MC]

i like but i would change one thing i think the light source is a lil to big and bright

i like the text and i like the effects good job keep it up

[ratchetnclank]

Love the sharpness and effects stig as well as the flow. A bit of floaty head syndrome here though.

Just one question.... why potter?

[Stiggeh]

i like but i would change one thing i think the light source is a lil to big and bright

i like the text and i like the effects good job keep it up

Hehe still trying to get used to what is the right amount of brightness. :P
Thanks

Love the sharpness and effects stig as well as the flow. A bit of floaty head syndrome here though.

Just one question.... why potter?

Thanks, I'll try sort the floating head thing.
Erm... it's mainly to do with the font as it doesn't look right when it has two or more words imo.
I guess I could have gone with Harry though.

[Takken]

Lighting is poor. Soft brush at top does not = to good lighting. Work on your contrast and utilize the element in a way that creates much more pleasing composition. It looks rater dull. Text needs to go.

[ratchetnclank]

Hehe still trying to get used to what is the right amount of brightness. :P
Thanks


Thanks, I'll try sort the floating head thing.
Erm... it's mainly to do with the font as it doesn't look right when it has two or more words imo.
I guess I could have gone with Harry though.

I meant why potter for the stock

[Stiggeh]

Lighting is poor. Soft brush at top does not = to good lighting. Work on your contrast and utilize the element in a way that creates much more pleasing composition. It looks rater dull. Text needs to go.

That gives me more of an idea than "work on your effects" so thanks.
I do know soft brush at top doesn't mean good lighting though, I think I need to change the lighting on the cut.

I meant why potter for the stock

Harry Potter is awesome and you shall not have a word against it. ¬_¬
:P

[GFX_MC]

Harry Potter is awesome and you shall not have a word against it. ¬_¬
:P

agreed ^.^