Critique and please dont hold back.

[SuFi B A M F513]

[Aether]

I like the liquified smoke on the bottom but the c4d's ruin the whole "smooth" feeling of the sig imo.

[SuFi B A M F513]

[Derosion]

First one:
I like the effect at the bottom, um the effect on the left looks weird because it's really dull and it's a totally different color.

Yes, Aether is right, the C4D on the right ruins the type of feeling to the signature.

Your text is actually decent, but if you're doing multiple texts then try not to spread them apart.

This is one of your best works from me, kiu.

Second one:
Overall it looks LQ.

The render and effects are stretched for some reason.
Again, if you're resizing hold shift.

I'm not even going to mention stuff like, flow, lighting, etc because you have to get down your basics first.

[SuFi B A M F513]

[SuFi B A M F513]

Please can i get some feedback, i would like to wear a tag here, but i dont want to until i get a good critique.

[JustInCredible]

you still dont know how to resize.. ok first press crt+t. that should bring up a square around the picture your using. then go to the corners, not the side or top. from there hold down shift and drag in. this should keep the picture looking normal.

[SSSSK]

ok when resizing your image always use ctrl to lock the proportion because it will keep the quality of the image better

[SuFi B A M F513]

thanks guys those comments were really helpful, i just think the render is bad anyways, the stock is a little distored to begin with so im done using it.