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Thread: vomit

  1. #1
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    Default vomit

    Oh well...


  2. #2
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    it's a bit too empty
    and the brush coming from the mouth doesnt go too well with it in my opinion
    but its not bad
    kiu

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    It's actually a c4d sharpened and set to color dodge.
    But yeah, I get what you mean

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    Way too empty and on top of that you have a very weak background.

    Place the text closer to the render.

    Just use simple black or white borders.

    Kiu.






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    You need to bring out the difference in your colors more. They're all a little too grayed out which makes it appear very flat. I also think she needs to be puking up more content, just to make things interesting =p And personally, I'd have her vomitting up the type too.

    I also agree with Mega, except for the borders, I'd just drop the border in this case.






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