my first two pentools

[Xelo]

just started to learn the pentool. it is a lot off work, but fun to do. i am not good at it, but hey.. all beginnings is hard!!

comments welcome.

[Xelo]

comments plzz?

[Fur]

Really not that bad for starting off. One of the major things that I see is that it looks pretty flat. I don't know how you would even fix it, for I suck just as much with the Pen tool. The colors also look a little off to me. Like too many different types of oranges, plus the colors at the bottom of the apple look really weird.

The best thing I would say is ask pet for advice he is the pen tool king. And work on coloring a little more. Getting colors to blend together is a pain, I know. But once you have it down your art will look sick. Keep up the work.

[Xelo]

thanx Fur!! well pentool is def not my favo tool in PS. it takes to much time to get a decent result and also needs a lot of practice. But i will make some others soon, actually i want to vectorise my 3 sons from photo's when they were 3 years old.

[Fur]

Oh just noticed the girl, Very nice, the skin looks really good. Really the only major thing I see wrong is the facial structure looks off and flat. Just need to work on the 3-D ness of the pen tool, but 3D effects come more from color blending. I would also add a few more shades of darker reds to the lips, they are way too bright. Really not bad though. Just keep at it.