Ironman

[Monroe]

ORIGINAL:


EDIT:

Just finished this. Suggestions for improvement?

Thanks in advance.

[ketg]

wow
very nice
i like how the text is placed nicely on the swirl lines
the c4d infront of ironman on the left hand side is a bit annoying
i do really like the text's and the background
work a bit on lighting imo
good job kiu (:

[Monroe]

Thank you!

It's funny I was actually fighting with myself over having the C4D cover him on the left side. I liked how it served as pointers toward the focal point (his face). But perhaps it does more harm than good. Here's an edit:

[Buckley]

It needs a light source, also the border is to big for the sig. The effects could use more blending with the render. Also the render needs to be sharpened and given depth. kiu.