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    Default girl with gun

    haven't got a clue who the girl is??

    i like the depth and compo. but dunno wether it's finished?

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    I'd say make the white splatters orange or purple.... also the lines from the lightsource break the flow a bit imo.... otherwise pretty sweet.

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    it looks good but i feel like its a bit incomplete, something seems to be missing but i cant put my finger on it.

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    Feels a bit empty and yes, as Aether said, the lines break the flow.

    Otherwise it's a pretty good piece.

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    Yeah like the others said, you should have all the lines, if not most of them, leading towards your focal point. You have some, but then the ones sprouting from the top contradict them. Also, I dont like the batch of white in the left bottom corner. Looks blurred and out of place. Might want to tinker with the composition as well. Not bad though, kiu.


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    that light purple dot in the right half is what's making it feel empty. usually when theres that kind of fading shadow/antishadow its there to bring your attention to something, like words or your focal point. try putting your name in it or something... idk i'm bad with text and such...

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    thanx 4 the comments! added a V2.

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    I dont know, I like it all except for the purple dot. It looks random. If you slap some text on it then I think it would be a lot nicer. I like the left side of V2.


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