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    Default ewwwwww


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    Topaz much?

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    Over the c4d yup

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    50 views wow....

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    You have to work on your lightning a bit.
    You need one lightning source. I don't see a real lightning source but that isn't the real problem. It looks like you've 3 places from where the lightning is comming from.
    One of that lightning spots is placed right and that is the one at the right side almost above the renders head. Then I see 2 more lightning spots on the left side. I would darken them too create realistic lightning.

    The C4d you used looks a bit lq to me.
    Even tho you topazd it it still doesnt look good IMO.
    The text needs some work... also the clipping mask bar has to go IMO.
    I like the fractals and the green colors.

    Keep working at it




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    Quote Originally Posted by xSattisfaCtioNz View Post
    Topaz much?

    whats topaz ??

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    a plugin

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    Quote Originally Posted by Opt1k4l View Post
    Not bad. Pretty tight concept, needs a bit of a better execution though. I'd drop the face dupe over the text. Too much Topaz, needs to be toned down. I like the far left, and far right, and center, but your midway points between each are kinda meh. Mostly cuz of the topaz and mask though.
    Needs a little more tweaking of the colors too. The color on your c4d doesn't work at all.






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    i dunno.. colors are meh, the clip bar looks strange, you might place the text there? but mostly the tag is non-consistant. Left and right side don't match imo.

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    Topaz is looked down upon the GFX community because it is extremely cheap and very noticeable, other than that it looks good.



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