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  1. #1
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    Default Gaara of the Sand

    C&C Please.

    I've been working on Depth so please tell me how I did in that Category.

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    hehe i love gaara <3
    the only issue i have with it is that its majorly oversharpened... and i mean like really really really oversharpened...

    the text is a little lame... but i suck at text... so i cant really help you

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    The depth is good but text is meh and its kinda simple. But since depth was your goal you did fine imo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Foxx Z View Post
    C&C Please.

    I've been working on Depth so please tell me how I did in that Category.
    Drop the text. Doesn't really feel like there's a whole lot going on here either. Depth is decent, but could still use some work. For example, the hand is coming towards the foreground, yet it's at the same focus as the face which should be further back. So, one of those isn't really on the right focus level, currently. Even just a tiny bit of blurring on the hand would be good.






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    tbh the depth could be way better.
    the sand that is around him is sharp overall, but the claw should be sharp (as it is, cause it is on the same distance as gaara, but the sand directly near him is in the distance and should be blurred. that will make depth!! if you want to take it even a step further, then blur the hand of gaara a bit. you wil then have nearby blurring (the hand) sharp focal, and distance blurring. good luck.

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