My style Mastered Comment please!

[sherry+]

I learned this style, while I was in the Signature showdown tournament.
Now I have perfected the style, see this. comment please.

[Xelo]

to much i think. and very sharp overall. nice flow tho..

[Synsational]

Looks um, busy? But it has a nice flow to it.

[theclan10]

Sorry to say it but my personal opinion about this is that i hate it.. the only positive thing i can say about it is the flow i'm sorry

i'm totally not liking this style.
i like your current sigs tho!

[Vicious Zen]

It takes too much away from your focal, and all it really looks like is a bunch of really messy oversharpened smudging. Not really a big fan of the style, to be honest.
The lack of color really isn't doing it for me either, and I don't like the text.
To be perfectly honest, I've definitely seen better from you.

[JustInCredible]

its aight. its not as bad as they make it out to be. tbh this style is unoriginal. as for the sig you didnt execute it well. i would erase some of it and make some of her body parts visible. and then just blend it in really well. lets see a version 2.