Bleach-Ichigo

[Cryofdeath3]

This is my first time using a splatter brush...

[Friction]

Render is LQ, the C4D near the render's head doesn't flow, and the smudging underneath the render doesn't match the area abpve.
Not a lot of depth either, but colours are OK\

[loghan]

Only I know seeing that the text is bad? Render has poor quality. 3d render near the head is also bad. Colors are good, but red predominates maybe more. Keep working ...

[Vicious Zen]

This is my first time using a splatter brush...

Totally not feeling this one. I agree with the above two posters entirely. Your splatter doesn't really fit either, and feels very random. And whatever that soft glowyness is near his hear, I'd definitely drop that.
The color on the right side is really trying to steal your focus too, tone that down some.

[Cryofdeath3]

Well I guess I'm gonna change it up, but should a get a better render?

[Monroe]

Well I guess I'm gonna change it up, but should a get a better render?

Yes

[Cryofdeath3]

I just took off that stuff but I'm gonna have to make a different but better one later on....