Thinking

[Starlight-GFX]

My newest pic, some tips?




My stock:

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/g...stocks/16m.png

[sirenzo]

wow i don't want to be the first to say this but here goes could use a bit more smudging.
render is hard to see with u text over top of it and the right side just doesn't look like it is quite fitting your piece here id try smudging in that area a bit more to flatten it out. kiu m8 and white boarder , i think look better with a black or color from your flowers on the left just imo

[DR809]

This is over contrasted and the text is a bit too big and takes away from the focal. You also have way too much empty space going on. Otherwise kiu.

[Starlight-GFX]

Thanks for tips!
V2 with bit more smudging and other borders...