marine girl

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c&c pleasss

[cc.RadillacVIII]

The colors and bg don't match the render at all. You would probably do best by starting the whole thing all over. And keep in mind to use colors that goes along with the render (could use colors from the render) and a bg that is somehow related to the marine/navy/sea etc.

[Joeyy]

I agreee with what radillac said. Also I don't like the text :O.

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ok ty for comments

any more comments

[Monroe]

I would remove the render and text and develop it into a purely abstract piece.

[SF.Kira]

The colors don't really match it at all...

[Torc]

Yea the colors don't match at all. Oh and that wouldn't be Marine. That would be Navy Girl.