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Thread: Keepin busy..

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    Default Keepin busy..



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    i dont like the splatter that cover the whole focal.

    erase the splatters from the body and right top corner imo

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    The splatter isn't really on the focal, except maybe his arm a bit.


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    it looks like that tho :P

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    Here you go:



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    Text position could be improved, and the background destroys the flow







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    Thanks for the CnC. Another revision:



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    looks alot less hectic For some reason i don't like it, but i'm really not sure why







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    i like the splatters and i thinkt he text is in an alright postion , just remove somew of them from its face , you removes too many on your v2 imo
    v3 is nice too (:

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    O dear, Flatty again with his Long Cnc's, Hide!
    When you place a render like this, there's a must of flow. Too be honest, there isn't much of a flow in it.
    The bg draws all the attention because it's brighter as the focal, Try to avoid that.
    The splatters could be used in a positive way, they were just placed incorrectly

    KIU mate

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