MY Latest~~~

[Slave]

I'm really proud of this one because I made all the fractals that went into this ( there are 4 different fractals^^)

I think I am finding my style and I'm really liking what I'm getting out of it

I thought I should point out as well that no tutorial was used to make this

I am looking for help tho with the text/placement I don't like currently where it is nor what the font is >.< Anyone give me some advice would be appreciated



P.S I am going to continue to work in fractals and soon into c4d's. Once I am finished I will host a package thats worth downloading

[Agato]

You should erase some of them fractals over the render.
try smudging in the render itself better with the background since the render just pops up.
Tone down the lighting a tad bit. the text needs some work aswell, bring it up to the focal more.
Other than that KIU

[Slave]

the text needs some work aswell, bring it up to the focal more.
Other than that KIU

Yes but where ? I have tried close to the head and it seems to distract rather than compliment. I don't mind changing the colour of the text, Tho you haven't helped me much.
Where should it go to be more complimenting ?

[Agato]

Yes but where ? I have tried close to the head and it seems to distract rather than compliment. I don't mind changing the colour of the text, Tho you haven't helped me much.
Where should it go to be more complimenting ?

Well what I would do if I was you, you can try out these methods and see if they work.
Bring the text towards her left side (if you're looking at it than its your right) right by her neck, if it still looks weird you can put part of the "S" where I told you on her and erase some of it so it looks like the text is behind her.
Mostly though you should change that font.
if you need help with text you can look at this.
http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45209
if you don't get what I said than i'll make some examples if nesecary.

[Slave]

TY that was much better explained and very helpful! I'll see what I can do ^^

[limpouros]

try getting some effects on your text aswell.using clipping mask and gradient overlay can turn out very nice. or subtexts or even random shapes or lines.

[Slave]

Thanks guys & ty agato for the link it helped me out TONZ!! I will pay it forword when next I see someone qqing about there text like I have

My outcome with next text !!! It looks more professional now hat things have been cleared up for me

I always wanted to put my signature "Slave" but I always felt like it was so messy. Now I have a better understanding about placement

[limpouros]

much better

[Agato]

Np :]
The signature is starting to look better, now that I really look at it the hand that coming out looks over sharpened.
I hope you don't mind but I tweaked your signature a bit.
i'm gonna do a before and after. so the first one is yours and the second one is the one I tweaked.


What I did to mine,
I used one gradient map and made it Black & White and put it on Lumonosity. Blured the BG and erased over the focal (face) and set the opacity down and erased over the hand. than I used a very good plugin called Topaz, and went to Topaz Clean and it cleaned it up and didn't make the hand sharpened.
To get Topaz plug-in type in Google "Topaz Labs" and it should be the first link.

[Slave]

WOW thanks I will do that to my own an see how close I come to your outcome :P

I had seen many of you talking about Topaz but I thought this was just some lingo for a type of gradient effect XD