Over Heat

[Agato]

V1-


I erased versions V2 and V3 because all they were was just blured and sharpened more. I know its hard to see the render since the BG goes with it to much but I gatta learn from my mistakes. Thank you everyone who replied. I really appreciate it and be sure next time the render will work :].

[Monroe]

Not sure what to focus on

[Agato]

Not sure what to focus on

Not really much of a C&C but I tried making the face and the lights on him the focal.

[Monroe]

It was a question not a comment or criticism.

[sirenzo]

ok m8 why don't u try burning areas in your tag to bring your focal point out more it is difficult to see because blends so much with u bg . just an option sure u will read better replies with better options for you kiu man

[TRUeLM]

I can't really tell what I'm looking at...
Blur the background and sharpen the focal?

[Agato]

Okay I see what you guys mean now... my bad :P
I made a V2, if I need to blur it more than I will.
I tried making this signature blended good because I've been working on that lately.
Btw can you tell me how the compostition is?

[Monroe]

I see nothing wrong with the composition. Blurring and sharpening won't help because the render is hard to see due to the colors. Everything seems the same color that's why it's hard to pick it out of everything else.

[TRUeLM]

I guess...
V2 looks better to me though.

[JoshK]

What is the difference between V1 and V2