Dirty Ice

[Necrothalass]

[SF.Kira]

Hmm, hard to understand what is going on but interesting, stock please?

[Monroe]

Looks like her arm is chopped off. The gray background makes the whole piece have a dull look. Maybe replace the gray with some light shades of green.

[Necrothalass]

Hmm, hard to understand what is going on but interesting, stock please?

[Necrothalass]

Looks like her arm is chopped off. The gray background makes the whole piece have a dull look. Maybe replace the gray with some light shades of green.

that'd make it hard to see the C4Ds though?

[Buckley]

Looks monotone, the c4d around her could have been blended with the background more. Also change the text and incorporate more effects.