Allen Walker

[Agato]

I entered this in KOTH but it doesn't seem like its gonna win so I'm gonna post it here for people to C&C on :]


Render:

Before-


I filled in everything on him... took about 2 hours.

[silent_assasin]

Nice

[ketg]

WOW i can see a complete change

[Agato]

Nice

Not really much of a C&C but thanks :P

Is there anything wrong with it? maybe I can improve next time

WOW i can see a complete change

Sorry I didn't even see your post :P my bad

Thanks :] it took me a long time to do all of this because it had so much details on it.

i'm willing to give out the edited render to anyone that wants it.

[Checkerz]

good job. but it has no clear focal point. maybe a lighting source?

[Slave]

This one creeps me out tbh xD
I don't know much about bw bro .. Again I don't have much to offer you as a improve so much as maybe try more colour :P

[DR809]

Well all you did was work on the quality of the render, which was you did a good job on.
However, there really is nothing going on except the the c4d that was placed on the bottom. The background is good but more should be done to the foreground.
Otherwise kiu.

[Agato]

Thanks everyone, yea the more I look at it the more I think that the c4d placement and background could of been placed better.

Checkerz, there is a light source but I tried not making it "Noticeable"
Its right by the face but its on the side.

I still need to work with composition and other things.

THANKS AGAIN! :]