high school of the dead

[Bogui]

made this 3-4 days ago for someone on another site
cnc please:

[Vicious Zen]

Needs more color, for sure. Too monotone. Needs to accentuate the depth more, because it's there, but you need to do a little more blurring and sharpening on a few places, I'm thinking. Text is good, effects are decent, but could use a little more work on the lighting. It's really dark overall, but it kind of works here, so I'd go really subttle with the light, if you decide to add more.

[silent_assasin]

One word, dead. It seems really too dark for me, and quite unfinished