CandySalesMan

[Gaaf]

C&C Please

[Doodle]

Too much C4d my friend, . Tone it down above him. Also, imo the text could be one color and look nice. Just keep workin bro.

[Derosion]

As stated above, your C4D's are too overpowering and my attention was directed to the C4D's, instead of the focal that was intended, itself.

Tone it done, erase them and don't just add them in one area, in comparison it looks bad.

You need to add more things other then C4D's. I'm not advising you to create anything hectic, just a few light effects.

I'd play around with the text a bit more, the placement is good because it matches your flow.

My main concern here is just the wild C4D's, which to be honest, covers a large portion of this piece.

Again, try different techniques. It isn't necessary for you to always have C4D's.

Keep it up!

[Gaaf]

Yeah kk.
i wasnt so sure about this 1.
ty fot the c&c 's