Hmm well text in both of them stand out too much and take away from the focals imo.
1st. It seems like you wanted to get to flow to go in the direction of the guitar but the musical brushes placed everywhere kind of messes it up.You usually want the flow to go in one direction however it can be sent out in multiple dirrections as long as they're consistant. Colors are nice maybe the green could go but its nice. This itself seems lacking and could use more work. =/
2nd. I like what you did with the paint brush seems nice and a step in the right direction but the shapes seem a bit random and out of place and lighting seems off. Otherwise it's alright
So overall they're alright sigs but I feel as if you could do more with a bit of more effort into them. Its clear you know how to use the pen tool so try to expand on that and learn to work with vectors I can see both sigs with great potential, especially if you used vector art. There are some tuts on this site that could really do you some good.
Keep working at it bro and sorry if this is a bit harsh but that way you'll get better
Last edited by DR809; 09-24-2010 at 09:37 PM.
My Three Rules Of Making a Sig Flow, Lighting and Depth
As said above you work wonderful with the pen tool can put many to shame ^^
KIU you obviously have talent there , I also agree with Mr.Dr about you using these sigs into vectors I see that it looks like already they are going in that direction
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can put many to shame ^^
