Loneliness - 3D art

[Mish-A-Man]

his is my first 3D wallpaper ever created I used Poser and, of course, Photoshop for a background and final touch...

Anyway, I need your suggestions and tips on how I can improve it... please, be free to comment.

[kidmed]

Well drawn model! But is that supposed to be a femur sticking out of her left leg? It shouldn't be visible behind muscles. The shading is well done, but it looks too airbrushed/soft imo (except for her hands, those are niice). The inside of her elbows (left and right) doesn't look realistic.

It looks like the ghost face is imprinted in the background sky instead of in front of her. And the bg sky is low quality.

[Mish-A-Man]

Thanks, I really needed this kind of suggestions... I'll be following your instructions and for a few days I think I will made some changes, depends on free time that I have you've been really helpful thanks!

[kidmed]

Glad to help =]