Red Mystery

[Akali]

CnC!!!



Remade:

[Cap'n Jazz]

Really plain but it's also really crisp and clean. Not too bad, but could be way more interesting.

[Akali]

hmmm i made some improvements i guess just to make it stick out more

[sirenzo]

its a mystery alright cant see u focal point

[Vicious Zen]

Like v2 more, I still think there should be some more effects though. Maybe some more of those blue lines, or something. And I don't see how Sirenzo doesn't see the focal, your stock sticks out from the bg pretty nicely.

Overall this one is pretty nice, I just feel like it could maybe use just a little more tweaking and it could be really tight.