Samurai(Girl)

[ejbonagua]

New again. CnC please. The text sucks, i know.

[Cap'n Jazz]

This is your best for sure! Try to add some interesting effects, though.

[Xelo]

first things first: so you'v got a long name and that doesn't fit easely. just shorten it to EJB.
i sometimes shorten my name to XL. lol.

the colors are strange in this tag. her head is yellow, her torso is white, and then her hand is yellow again.
i see a nice flow going on from left bottom to right top.
nice blending of the focal.

good job mate! keep 'm coming!

[ejbonagua]

Thanks. Any suggestions for a good focal pic?

[Xelo]

there are good render sites on the net.
one of them is planetrenders... you will find nice stuff there.
http://planetrenders.net/

also on the void itselfzz there is plenty enough.

http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=61

[sirenzo]

not bad but should bring back elbow a tad think erasing that cuts off from your tag but nice feel kiu

[ejbonagua]

sirenzo, the elbow isnt showed there. thats the reason that i smudged it

[GabbaGabbaHEY]

You erased/smudged the elbow a bit t much.
But its getting somewhere, nice sig