Yeah, try to use some more difrent c4d's, and that c4d above the hand looks displaced for me. also i think some brushes would loko great with this style. keep it up
Not diggin this style ex >.< I've seen you do better :P the c4d seems more important because it's more clear try a better render if you wanna keep this style going, if not get rid of the c4d an try a new one, or try a different, less flat bg and try an adjust the renders colours/lines.
Anyways, you know I totally luv to see your work but I know you can do better an thats why im diggin into you :P
I love the style here actually. I'd go with V1 though.
I'd get rid of the stock from the bg and just use the girl though, keeps it nice and clean. Feels like it could use something else though, maybe some 2D shapes or something.
The background is too plain in my opinion. If it was a stock, you could've slightly blurred it.
Work on creating a stronger background. The C4D's look really nice here, imo.
dj
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