Disturbed C&C plz

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I've made a new Disturbed render Let me know what you think. I really like the text on this one.



C&C Please.

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Lighting is nice. However you have on flow to the right of him and something else going in a completely weird direction on the left. Text imo isnt working for me.
the overall sig feels very monotonish.
Keep working at it though.