Protoss Sig. I love it!

[Slave]

may i have your render ?

[DR809]

The focal is to bright . Some of the effects around the focal seem to be grainy which affects the overall quality imo.
Work on the overall depth since there seems to be none. The burn tool in this sig would be your best friend.
The text itself needs to be worked on.
Something that also caught my eye is the whole left area since its darker than that of the focal it's takes away some attention to it.
The lighting itself could use some work aswell.
Otherwise this sig has potential but could use a bit of work.