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  1. #1
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    Default first sig in 8 months lol





    CnC


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    Quite nice for 8 months.The C4D on the right side has a little throwoff right above the arm that i would erase. Thext placement is a little off and i would change the font and the color. Brighten up the render a little its a little dark, you cant relly see any details on it. Keep it up man.

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    thnx.


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    I second everything Sitewhite said.
    You also have real opportunity for depth here, which you should take advantage of. Blur the jet in the bg, and his feet (but just a little)






    SOMETIMES I LIKE TO CREATE THINGS


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    i have lost my touch . thanks


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    V2 :


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    V1 is lots better then V2, V1 is too dark. I thought i saw a new face roundhere, welcome back. (i dont think we've met, so hi!)







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    I agree with spartan. V2 is to red, I think by blur the jet he just meant to make it look like its moving in the background and iron mans feet so that theres kind of a flow pattern to it. And you still need to brighten him up. Keep working on it though.

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    man it feels a bit over contrasted in second one and in first one it feels too blurry try added a new layer of your render used and erase parts u don't want visible and kinda blend it in with effects kiu good start


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    thanks for cnc guys. i just need to get back into the swing of things.
    nice to meet you sparta ^^


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