Prince of Persia(Again, LOL)

[ejbonagua]

More smudged v2


CnC please

[Takken]

You have some flow going on and the smudge is fairly consistent, however it lacks color, it looks too dull and it needs mroe detail in the smudge. The lighting isn't all that good and there is not much of an effective contrast going on. I'm not realy liking the text; the siuze is too small, font doesn't go and the placement is otherwise.

Like the effort though, keep at it!