Smudge sig.

[Interrobang]

I really think I have improved on this one. Tell me what you think.

[Downfall]

wouldnt count it as a smudge sig mate
its to dark
render needs to be blended
and text needs mega work
but keep trying mate you will get there

[Interrobang]

How would you recommend I do those things?

[Liquid]

You have a good start to the sig but you need blending. kiu

[Downfall]

id suggest removing that horrible lighting and not centre but place the render more in the middle, blend it add some nice c4d effects and some awsome text. but thats just me

[Gaaf]

set the black space to an opacity of around 20/30%
i think the textplacement is prittygood, but u could use a other font
it also lacks color, and blending. i think the background is smudged pritty good
it just needs a little more but its a good starter
kiu