Another Crisis sig

[SuFi B A M F513]

CNC please










i hope v2 is better to you guys..3rd one is with a redish tint text

[starwar]

sorry cant grasp the concept. text placement is ok

[SuFi B A M F513]

sorry cant grasp the concept. text placement is ok

what concept cant you get? Its a signature with a crisis 2 soldier in it, its smudged with some other effects in there, CNC please.

[Mountford]

Smudge gets a bit overpowering, the position is good, so to are the colours, just show more focus on the Crisis dude. I agree texts position is okay, the text itself isnt that nice imo :/

Id love to see you have another go, could be awesome!
KIU

[Avatar]

over smudged and over blurred. No defined focal.

Bring the render back in and blend it so you have a defined focal...my eyes are wandering over the sig trying to make out the soldier.

[SuFi B A M F513]

Thanks guys, i will give it some more work.

[Monroe]

what concept cant you get? Its a signature with a crisis 2 soldier in it, its smudged with some other effects in there, CNC please.

Ahh, the thesis of originality.

[SuFi B A M F513]

Ahh, the thesis of originality.

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[Monroe]

I was just admiring your creative genius.

[Cap'n Jazz]

Smudge is a bit over done. There's no depth. And there's no lighting. Try correcting those things and you could have a pretty good sig.